I created a draft article for my double page spread in my magazine this will be the main article in my magazine this article will be on the fictional artist "Lucy Gray" and her comeback after rehab. I chose this topic as the artist is of the same age range as my target audience.
My teacher marked this draft as a grade B, and she said overall it was a very good piece of work. My teacher marked it and gave me feed back on how to improve it, my teacher said I need to talk more about certain things such as how the artist album can be downloaded and bought. I will apply this feedback to my final article.
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