I was given written feedback and a assessment grade. The assessment grade she gave was a B. The strengths she outlined for my front cover were that the image had a great eye line match with the audience. The colour scheme is good and its clear to the audience. I have used excellent adobe Photoshop skills for the design work. I have used appropriate sell lines for my target audience.
The areas to improve are to make the date smaller. Move the main article sell lines to a different place to make them easier to read.
I acted on this critique by designing a new front cover. I readjusted the size of the date and placed it after the masthead. I created a banner with the sell line "competition", this created more space for the magazine and left the layout looking less busy. I took the main article sell lines "Lucy Gray"and placed it to the left so that the colours of it contrasted better with the model. I then moved the "+" above that. The composition of the page looks a lot better due to the feedback I got.
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