Once I had completed my my front cover for my magazine, it was shown to my classmates for them to give me feedback on it. They were given sheets where they wrote positives and negatives of my front cover. This feedback was very useful because they are in my target audience. I have included some examples of the feedback sheets that had very beneficial feedback.
Positive feedback - The positive things that were picked up on my feedback was that the magazine was suitable for the target audience of 16-19 and of both genders and was identified straight away by my peers in class. They also picked up on the fact the magazine is a hybrid genre. Another thing that was picked up on as being very good was the front cover image, people in my class said it was a well edited clear image and was integrated well with the text. They also said that the image fits well with the genre of the magazine. What was also commented on was the font of text and colours used on the cover, they said the text was very bold and stood out which was something i was trying to achieve when making the magazine front cover. The colour scheme was said to be good and was liked by both genders. Overall they said my magazine front cover looked very professional.
Improvements - There was few things that were outlined that could have some improvement on, one this was that the sell line "post rehab interview" was difficult to see as in was in front of the model image so was a bit unclear, to improve on this I added a effect on the text to give it a shadow so that it was bold and would stand out against the model image. Another thing that was outlined to improve on was the white space on the page as there was quite a bit of it so I decided to move some of the sell lines around to make less of it.
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